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Way of the Cheetah

Way of the Cheetah, by Lynn Viehl, is a book about writing fast — producing more books in a year. The first time I skimmed through it I found it useless; after re-reading I like it much better. It’s a good collection of advice for people who are relatively new to writing seriously.

It takes 50 pages (of 70 total) to get to the actual *writing*. Before that, it’s scheduling and equipment and space to write — all important, but not actual writing. (The section on equipment will probably be pretty useful to many people, given the number of times I’ve seen people in panic over computer crashes that lost a day/week/lifetime of writing.) If you haven’t already read a bunch of how-to-write books or been hanging out on the internet with other writers, it’s worth a look.

Her three-pass editing process is very nice and streamlined — in theory. Maybe someday I’ll be a better writer and be able to only edit three times; I would love that. Or maybe someday I’ll be a better writer and still go over each scene a dozen times.

She advocates writing straight through the first draft, editing each day’s work later that same day, but not while writing. (Editing here means changing wording, fixing grammar – minor stuff.) That’s it til the whole book is done and she prints it and marks it up, doing the line editing as well as rewriting scenes and chapters if necessary. The third edit is polishing the prose.

I don’t have any *problem* with that process. I just don’t see how to do it. Maybe she plans things in great detail before hand; I don’t actually know. And if that’s the solution, then I’m screwed. Even my “planning” stage (in which I write an entire zeroth draft) leaves me without a complete scene by scene outline. So as I start the first draft, things change, and I end up deleting scenes, adding scenes, moving scenes, rewriting scenes — all before I’m done with chapter two.

(Here’s an old post about my revision process. I’ve changed terminology — what I called the first draft is now the zeroth draft, and I am not doing step 2a of typing it in! I thought (correctly) that it might actually be more efficient to do a blank page rewrite. And I still haven’t read the book referred to in the comments.)

One might argue that I’m doing her second pass during my first (not zeroth) draft, and that’s probably true. I could leave it for later. Having tried that in the past, the idea of having a whole novel’s worth of horrible awful revision to do at once makes me want to give up in despair. So I don’t think that’s the solution.

Anyway, I do so much rearranging of scenes that I *can’t* also do line-editing stuff on the same printout, because it very quickly becomes impossible to read. So I revise on screen, print, scribble all over the page, type in changes, revise on screen again, and often, print it out again. I am trying to cut back to one printout per chapter. But I don’t want to streamline my revision process at the expense of the book’s quality, no matter how much faster I’d like to be working.

At least the current novel (my second) is going way faster than my first one did. Not as fast as I’d like, though some of that is due to lack of time spent on it rather than multiple revision passes. But I have learned a few things.

And writing this post was a good example of how *not* to get any work done.

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A Feast For Crows; Synopses Links

Finished A Feast for Crows. Loved it, though I’m not champing at the bit for the next one just yet. I need a break to read something completely different. I’m trying to read a book a month this year (those of you doing the 52-book challenge are welcome to laugh). I didn’t think this was the first book I read this month, but I don’t have any other posts tagged. And apparently I never tagged a post for Tamara Siler Jones’ Ghosts in the Snow, but I must have read it last fall. (It was good, go read it.)

I skimmed through Way of the Cheetah and found it less than useful. I’ll take another look before I delete it/give it away.

Paperback Writer lists synopsis-writing links.

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Ghosts in the Snow, Tamara Siler Jones

Plans for any sort of productivity today were spoiled by Tamara Siler Jones’ Ghosts in the Snow, which is a really good fantasy mystery.

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Alphabet of Thorn, Patricia A. McKillip

Finished McKillip’s Alphabet of Thorn. As always, it was beautifully written. The plot was quite predictable once all the puzzle pieces were laid out, but it was enjoyable to watch it all come together, and the decisions at the end didn’t necessarily have to go the way they did.

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15 things about me and books

1. I don’t remember not being able to read.

2. In 2nd or 3rd grade, the girl down the street told me she didn’t like to read, and I didn’t understand how anyone could not like to read.

3. I have never not read fantasy. The only of my favorites that weren’t fantasy were the Little House books, and the big books of Greek and Native American mythology.

4. On a family vacation when I was (in elementary school?), I met a woman who had known Laura Ingalls Wilder.

5. Despite that, I didn’t realize books were written by actual people until I was in my early 20s. Similarly, it never occurred to me to write down all the stories I made up in my head.

6. I no longer finish every book I start.

7. The summer between college and grad school, I read well over a book a day, including a lot of things I didn’t particularly like, because I wanted to be familiar with them. Most of my life, my average was more like 1-2 a week.

9. I don’t fetishize books as physical objects, although I no longer tear off and eat the corners of the pages.

10. I have not read most of the books I own, especially the nonfiction.

11. I didn’t move from the library’s juvenile section to the adult section, or discover that it had a science fiction section, until the summer I was 12 or 13 and volunteered there. I spent a lot of time shelving books. Before then, it hadn’t occurred to me that anything outside juvenile would be interesting.

12. As I remember, in elementary school, I took the reading book home on the first day of class and read the whole thing, every year, and never thought that was odd.

13. I heard “Put that book down now!” rather a lot as a child.

14. I stopped reading on May 31, 2002. The next novel I read was probably that December.

15. I’m slowly starting again – have read about five novels this year, not counting the ones on tape.

16. When I started this I didn’t think I could come up with 15 things, and now I’ve thought of many more.

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Book Log

Books read recently: Melusine, Master and Commander (abridged, on tape), Warprize, My Antonia (on tape).

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Harry Potter and the Spoilers

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HPatHBP

Finally read HP6. Liked it better than 5 and much better than 4. (Can’t remember what I didn’t like about 5.) It is by no means a perfect book, but I am very eager to read 7.

I would make more detailed comments, but everyone else has already said everything, and convienently yhlee has linked to comments and to people who link to comments….

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Franklin biography

Finished Walter Isaacson’s biography of Benjamin Franklin (abridged and read by Boyd Gaines) on the way back. It’s very favorable — I suppose it’s hard to find bad things to say about Franklin, though Isaacson gives a chapter at the end to those who tried — though I’d like to hear what John Adams had to say about their time in France together. Next time I need a tape I’ll see if the library has a bio on him.

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Weekend Media Report

Carl Hiaasen, Basket Case (Abridged, and read by the author) – Listened to this on the drive down. *Hilarious*. I’d heard of Hiaasen years ago and never read any of his books. He’s a columnist for the Miami Herald and his books are set in South Florida.

This one attracted me because the protagonist writes obituaries. The newspaper politics in the book were hilarious.

Hitchiker’s Guide to the Galaxy (movie) – I enjoyed it. Zaphod is even more annoying on screen, however. I last reread the book so long ago that I don’t remember it well enough to complain about the differences. The only one that bothered me was that Marvin looked totally wrong from how I imagined him.

Kill Bill, vol. 1 – All I’d ever heard about it was that it had awesome fight scenes. I’m not a fan of fight scenes, so I didn’t bother to see it. My boyfriend taped it and made me watch it, and I was hooked pretty quickly. What it is, despite huge plot holes, is an awsome *story*, very well told. I thought the out-of-order sequence of “chapters” was a good way of making the story more interesting.

Must have sucked to see it in the theater, because it doesn’t have an ending. When it was over we went straight to Blockbuster and rented…

Kill Bill, vol. 2 – Which was also good, but I think having less of a mystery made it less interesting. Also, I was really pissed off at the resolution because
I’m supposed to believe that killer assassins who say “fuck” when the over-the-counter pregnancy test turns up positive will suddenly turn all “Oh no I can’t be an assassin any more because it’d be bad for my baaaayyyyybeeeeeee that I didn’t want anyway and could just abort or send out for adoption.” Well, fuck that. I rinse my brain of the last part of that movie. It never happened.

Grr.

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