{"id":320,"date":"2007-01-29T03:31:00","date_gmt":"2007-01-29T07:31:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.scriniary.smallinfinity.net\/blog\/2007\/01\/29\/conflict-box\/"},"modified":"2007-01-29T03:31:00","modified_gmt":"2007-01-29T07:31:00","slug":"conflict-box","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/elizabethshack.com\/blog\/2007\/01\/29\/conflict-box\/","title":{"rendered":"Conflict Box"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>This isn&apos;t the book I meant to work on today.<\/p>\n<p>I decided to catch up on the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.crusiemayer.com\/workshop\/\">He Wrote, She Wrote<\/a> writing workshop blog, and <a href=\"http:\/\/www.crusiemayer.com\/workshop\/the-central-question-and-the-conflict-box\/jenny\/\">Jenny Crusie&apos;s post on the Conflict Box<\/a> struck me as useful.  <i>Diplomacy<\/i> is at a point where I need to take a look at the plot and make sure the conflicts are solid and all the characters are working towards their goals and butting heads.<\/p>\n<p>So I made a Conflict Box, or at least a modified version thereof.  Instead of one protagonist and one antagonist, I have two of each.  And rather than listing only Goal and Conflict for each character, I listed Goal, Means, and Obstacle.  (Which could be rephrased as Desire, Goal, Conflict, I guess.)<\/p>\n<p>Warning: For the at least one person reading this who avoids spoilers, even for unfinished unpublished books you&apos;re never going to read, there are spoilers in my diagram.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/pics.livejournal.com\/pollyc\/pic\/0001xg5z\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/pics.livejournal.com\/pollyc\/pic\/0001xg5z\/s320x240\" alt=\"Conflict Box for Diplomacy\" height=\"156\" width=\"320\" border=\"0\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>(Click on it once to enlarge it, and click again to enlarge it again.)<br \/>\n(Yes, it would have been faster to do by hand, but it&apos;s easier to edit this way.)<\/p>\n<p>So is it useful?  Maybe.  Having character goals, and how they plan to achieve their goals, is very useful.  But I had those already. I had the obstacles already too, but drawing this did help me consider whether they&apos;re useful obstacles.  Also, as I begin the rewrite, it gives me something to focus on.  In the first draft, Conway doesn&apos;t really appear until somewhere in the middle, because I didn&apos;t know what the plot was. He ends up kind of important, so I shouldn&apos;t ignore him&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>I do want to add a Resolution column, because it would be good to know that all the conflicts are resolved.  Especially since the details of how is the part I&apos;m stuck on right now.  \ud83d\ude42<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>This isn&apos;t the book I meant to work on today. I decided to catch up on the He Wrote, She Wrote writing workshop blog, and Jenny Crusie&apos;s post on the Conflict Box struck me as useful. 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